I really like her character design so I'm including her in this future game~ 25 frames in total, I think 5 separate layers? Will start sheeting her soon if people approve
critiques on anatomy, animation, etc are appreciated!
Wow, just saying. All your stuff is really good. Also just having 25 frames is good. Flows well and is smooth. great job. My only critique is the eye and it's shooting star effect. Looks great. I can really see the effort and careful precision for the animation. However, the last frame leaves it with a slight pause and, with the repeat returning it to the first frame, makes it seem like it is repeating. If that makes sense. More like a viewer knows it is repeating because of the slight pause. Truly, I didn't see it at first until I thought of critiquing your art work. Then it stood out but only for a split second. Overall though, this is pretty great.
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