Bishop Staff Twirl

Quick disclaimer: I love your work and that is the reason why i keep posting theese critiques, beacuse i really want to see you make something amazing here!

Okay so what is there to say about this piece? well lets start of in the region with the most problems, the neck area. So first of all his neck is a bit off, i love the idea of his neck being slightly more blocky but that right there does not quite fit. The neck scarf thing is also not completely connected, if you look closer at the back of it you should find that there apears white or seethroug lines in the "connected" cloth. i love the new staff and ring/halo but your triangles seems a bit thin. I lastly dont know if this was intentionel or not but i also noticed that the cloth/cape on his back dos'nt bend, i would advice for you to keep that look, it simply looks cooler than having two capes twisting and bending in the air. Btw try to make the halo spin around just as a test, i know for sure that i would love to see it, and it would look more like he was flying over the board if he extendet his capes straight and the halo was spinning fast. All in all some really nice improvements this time and i cant wait to see him finished!